THE TELEMACHUS BLOG - PAGE 1

Hey Guys!

Great Site. The artwork is stunning, and the stories are incredible.

I especially enjoyed the Tyler Bernard piece, "The First Time Abroad". Revealing Anderson's true nature with the use of the replacement rose's thorns was brilliant. I was curious, was the story going to end there? Chapter 5 works as an ending, but I really, really don't want it to end quite yet. I'm too curious! I want to know how Caleb deals with his horrific loss of virginity, or what happens in the weeks leading up to Mr. Kieran's letter, or how the training proceeds. I also want to know what happens to Tate and Angus. Is this the end of the story?

I'm also curious (I seem to be very curious today. Hm. Curious.) how you decide on the artwork. The art for the new "Aquaman Vs The Black Manta" is incredible, and goes great with the story. Will you ever go back and add artwork for existing stories? I'd love to see an interpretation of the Egyptian-themed room with the altar from "Undercover". Or of the courtyards with slaves dangling, or in cages waiting to be processed. Or anything from that story, which was one of my favorites. I also loved "Bartender Blues": both the story, and the artwork in Telemachus' gallery. Will there be more to this story as well?

My absolute favorite is Herodotus' "The Falcon's Fall". There's not enough sci-fi in gay erotica, and there's not enough gay erotica in sci fi. Here's both, served exactly to my tastes! The renderings were very well done, especially the scenes of falcon being disrobed, and the imagery was intense and provoking. Keep up the good work.

Basically, what I'm saying is "Thanks, and more, please!"

-Peter

Nope, it's not part of a story. It's just a standalone picture. Actually it's a portrait of a real person. I don't normally do portraits as I've tried them before and they always look like a thousand different people, but never the one they're supposed to look like. This one was an exception, if you know the guy you'd recognise him in the picture straight away. How I managed it is still a mystery, even to me, LOL.

Dave

# Aquaman - Ohhhh man. The expression on Aquaman's face. (bg) However, the detail I loved most were the thrashing feet. Great effect... right down to the bubbles. Amazing art, Herodotus.

# Jake 1 - That look on the cowboy's face! You have captured the mood created by Wolfpek sooooo perfectly. There is desire and contempt there. As for Jake (bg) he looks like a real goodie-two-shoes. As always, you amaze me, Herodotus.

Thanks

Aussie

# First, a question. Is this pic supposed to accompany a story? If so, please let me know which one.

# Second, this image actually looks really life-like. Some 3D images look 'odd' but this one is really natural looking. I don't know anything about creating 3D art but I'm amazed by the use of light that gives it depth. My favourite part...because that seems to be where my eyes are drawn... is the stubble of a beard. Great work.

Oh and just a quick response to your comment about writing another Tarzan tale with Profguy15 - HELL YES!

Thanks

Aussie.

# First, I am a huge fan of Ettinne's work.

"A soapy dew nuzzled into the stubble that coated his rugged jaw line" - What a graphic line. You enabled me to see this very clearly.

"His voice was like rich dark chocolate at the bottom of a deep well and vibrated through the soles of my feet" - I love when authors tap into a reader's other senses - by other, I mean not just sight. Taste isn't easy, but wow, did you do it well here.

"There was an Injun in my cabin... and he had a plan." What a final line. Talk about leaving a reading hanging! :

Wolfpek, you truly have my interest. The repeated use of the words "I hate" was cleverly done. Each one built on the one before and gave us a bitter sweet look at the watcher's torment. By using these hate statements you 'showed' us who Jake was. Not only his physical appearance but the way he spoke, and gave us a huge insight into his personality.

Wonderful writing. Can't wait for the next installment.

Thanks

Aussie

I should probably state right now that anyone reading this feedback shouldn't do so if they haven't read the story as there are spoilers throughout.

Title - Great title choice for this chapter. We do see a total transformation here.

"gurgled in delight " - What a descriptive phrase. You enabled me to 'hear' this clearly.

"Even now a part of his mind was refusing to accept that he had been utterly defeated. That would soon change!"

Great use of the qualifier at the end of this. It really adds emphasis. I admit, that phrase had a smile spreading across my face. :)

For me, the paragraph below was the key one... as we see Aquaman forced to 'assist' in his own rape.

"Aquaman groaned and tried to will his chute to open. The knowledge he was doing this crushed something of his old spirit but the pain was so intense he was willing to do anything to dull it. “I…I...am,” he muttered in shame knowing the joy such a disgraceful admission must give to his enemy. Part of the hunky superhero’s mind accused him of cooperating in his own rape!"

Not only has he passed on all power to the Manta, he helped it happen!

"Wide-eyed and slack jawed" More really powerful description.

"Aquaman said encouragingly in respect while using a lighter tenor of voice that, while still masculine, had a definite more passive vocal tone." I love the way you tap into your reader's senses... use of 'tone' gives much a clear aural picture.

Cicero, loved it. The hero has fallen... and there are still several chapters to go!

Thanks

Aussie

Dear Mr. Wolfpek

My name is Anders I’ am 24 years old Dane and just discovered your stories. An I’m impressed in such a way words cannot describe it.

I tried to decide which one of you great stories is the best.. but that is not possible:) they are all great

However I narrowed it down to this 3:

Captain invisible and the planet of doom, Undercover and deep blue.

All of your stories a huge.. the way you make it seem so real just makes me cum every time.

But I have to know:

Will the Zyrtacxian Krulok come to earth and enslave more human males?

Will Qube be awarded his bi-annual gift?

And will Sin kidnap an American high school football team and a English soccer team, just to find out which team will bring in more money ad the slave auction??

I know that you must be get a lot of fane mail and I don’t expect a answer, I just would like you to know that your stories have made me really happy and I will always be grateful for the fact that you have shared them with everybody:)

Faithfully yours

Anders

Dear Mr. Telemachus

My name is Anders I’ am 24 years old Dane and just discovered your stories. And I love them big time!!

But when will the marines be back in town? And will Adam bring some friends to join him when his rapes them agian;)

I love your work keep it up..:)

Faithfully ours

Anders

Added text story by Cicero: 'Aquaman Vs The Black Manta' (added chapter 5)

Added text story by Wolfpek: 'The End Justifies The Means' (new story)

Added to the 'Herodotus - Gallery 2' gallery: 'aqua6'

Added to the 'Herodotus - Gallery 2' gallery: 'Jake1'

Added to the 'Telemachus' gallery: 't12_myfavouritegeek'

Hi Dave,

Love the site. The pictures are fantastic - well done, they are excellent. I'm really in to the stories as well and especially Tyler's. They are very very good. Any idea when Chapter 2 of 'Taking an interest' is due and also when chapter 6 of 'First time abroad' is due? I can't wait. His attention to detail and the dominance theme is what sways me. It's a real turn on. Please let me know when we can expect any more. Many thanks and please keep up the good work. Your site is unique.

Regards

Peter